These are both of my College Adverts for the introduction project the first one I am way more proud of as the writing is very clear improvement over the other and i would these two adverts I have made are both very good at its job of getting parents and people around the age of 15 to 18 interested in Sunderland College. Downsides to my college adverts would be means of commutation with the college
Bailey's Review My classmate Bailey gave the review of this image from my college magazine cover "very good and straight to the point, but could use more colour variety" this is something I will have to take in mind when I make new projects as having more colour catches a viewers eye and makes what is being advertised seem more bright and happy. The next quote from Bailey regarding the first daft of the college advert for magazine is "very informative but hard to read on the blue writing" this quote from Bailey I agree with as the writing is hard to read due to the books in the background of the image. Katie's Review "I think it's very good but I think it should have the college phone number" what I take away from this is that on covers I should have added more means to communicate with the college on this magazine.
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